The Germans stayed a day longer than usual we, had known them for about three years, and this was the first time we never left the house. just one long orgy from waking up to going to sleep not knowing the time and Janet was the center of all our fantasies. It got a bit surreal, Janet walking about totally nude serving drinks, her lush young body on display, washboard flat stomach, long slim legs making it all the more a turn-on seeing lumps of semen creeping down them as she passed the drinks around. Her lips had a covering of semen drops hanging from her chin, her young maturing breast splatted with pearl-colored drops of semen, her nipples so hard and erect you could hang your coat on them.

I sat on the chair looking at Janet as she gave Porto a drink, semen slowly appearing from between her buttocks as it seeped from her arsehole, Pat behind her on her knees drinking the sperm as it appeared from her buttocks, Janet turned her head and Helga started to kiss her licking the semen from her lips and chin, dare not blink in case I missed anything of this spectacular scene. Anne was now on her knees in front of me her mouth open as she swallowed my cock whole, the site of Janet and the attention of Anna's mouth was too much and I ejaculated for the umpteen time did not think I had any sperm left but I filled Anna's mouth, as she opened her mouth showing me my sperm resting on her tongue. Poor Eric was fast asleep on the floor totally worn out his cock limped on his leg Janet had sucked him dry.

Porto was now once again fully erect his huge nine-inch cock standing proudly as Janet stood before him in all her naked splendid. Holding his cock at the base Janet stepped over him and slowly lowered herself onto his cock her pussy still overflowing with mine and Eric's semen inch by inch disappeared into her with ease until all you could see was Porto's balls, the full nine inches nestling in Janet's body. Janet flung her head back with a groan of pleasure leaving her lips developing into a scream of pure joy, and she started to bounce. Janet had learned quickly her timing was perfect on the upward stroke just the tip of his cock in her then thrusting down her arse a blur as she went faster, screaming now as this huge organ of pleasure ravished her young pussy. Mine and Eric's semen flowed from Janet's pussy onto Porto's balls, where Pat was lovingly licking them clean. I and Helga just sat there my semen resting on Helga's chin our mouths open seeing this site before us, what a find Janet was. Porto groaned gripping Janet's hips and holding her so all of his cock was in her emptied his balls into Janet who screamed with pleasure her hips bucking like she was on a horse as her orgasm overwhelmed her.

Janet collapsed onto Porto's chest his cock flipped out of Janet's pussy causing a tsunami of semen to flow into Pat's mouth, she lapped it up with relish trying not to miss a drop, licking the underside of his cock up to Janet's clit and pussy sucking any remaining semen from Janet's arsehole. Janet was squirming now on Pat's tongue as small orgasms rolled over her body, Pat took Porto's cock in her mouth, and as if it was a pacifier sucked like she was a small child. I sat there looking at this tweaking one of Helga's nipples the room filled with the smell of semen and pussy juice thinking how lucky am I.

We were exhausted after the last three days of sex and fell asleep until the next morning Porto and company were leaving today catching the night flight to Berlin. We drove them to the station and bid our farewells until the next time, all four of them looked at Janet and smiled we had never seen them so happy a twinkle in their eye and Janet was buzzing at the reaction they gave towards her. On the way home Janet was very quiet, I asked her what was wrong she looked at me and said," Hope you will let me join your parties again," I smiled Pat replied, "Once the word gets around about you, you will need more school uniforms because you will be in great demand." Janet blushed and smiled at the thought, "We will have to think of a way to take you away with us your mum would not be pleased if she knew the truth." they both laughed.

More adventures with Janet soon.

 

The idea is there alright, but spoiled because you didn't edit before you posted. So many errors. The punctuation is so terrible that some sentences make no sense at all.

And I know I'm wasting my time asking because half of the posters don't bother - why no tags?

 

this is a sex story, not an English class, if it was going to be published I might have spent more time, someone jerking them selves of do not care where the commas are.

 

While you’re right it is a sex story, that doesn’t mean you need to write it like a middle schooler. Punctuation, capitalization, and grammar are what brings readers back.

Sure they can rub one out quickly, as most of the folks reading it are either spun out of their gourd or drunk and don’t care. But there are readers who DO CARE.

Your attitude to criticism shows you DO NOT care about your audience.

 

Utter rubbish. Proper English is what makes things readable. I don't want to have to stop halfway through a sentence trying to figure out what you mean.

No one expects perfect... just an attempt to write inteligably.

 

Well I loved the story and look forward to more adventures with Janet.

 

thanks for your input it's nice to know you have the willpower to stop mid-masturbation and correct the punctuation.

 

Thanks a true sex story reader who appreciates the story not patronizing the writing, thank-you again

 

Yes luv the story

 

sorry what does inteligably mean is it another way to say intelligibly

 

sorry to offend you thought this was a sex site and not a book of the month club.

 

What does INTELIGABLY mean is that another way to say INTELLIGIBLY

 

The story is good, fairly hot. But I have to agree that it is badly written, e.g. punctuation, spelling, shifting from first person to third and back again. For me, it DOES often take me out of the story and it makes it difficult, at times, to understand what you’re trying to say.

One other thing that would help would be the use of a general title for the story and “Part 1”, “Part 2”, etc.; makes it easier to find the parts of the story and ensure one hasn’t missed an part.

 

Thank -you a bit of constructive criticism is much appreciated instead of trying to belittle the writer.